tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2692179639230192929.post3859496706314899549..comments2012-04-04T05:30:25.258-07:00Comments on Burkhart Legacy: Chapter Six: Another One Bites The DustJessicaxRockhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17596780597892263881noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2692179639230192929.post-40334796815375248432012-03-28T22:54:01.961-07:002012-03-28T22:54:01.961-07:00I read it the same way as Red, lol. Now about this...I read it the same way as Red, lol. Now about this chapter...<br /><br />Damn girl. You know how to keep a reader's attention! Your writing is really, really good. Color me impressed. (Translated, all that nonsense I just wrote means I'm loving your legacy. In case it wasn't clear. =D)Buckleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15791098360536318915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2692179639230192929.post-7500328415578979152012-03-21T20:51:54.045-07:002012-03-21T20:51:54.045-07:00Action packed chapter!! Awesome!
That is quite...Action packed chapter!! Awesome! <br /><br />That is quite a disturbing last picture! Yikes!!!<br /><br />As for this being Amelias fault, in the last chapter I read it as amelia heard the sound of the apartment door opening or something and assumed it was Donovan. I didn't read it as she opened the door for the kidnapper. So she's clear in my book. =)Redhead Creationshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16622159593521956793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2692179639230192929.post-47375752538012208262012-02-05T03:12:02.514-08:002012-02-05T03:12:02.514-08:00I agreeI agreeTestingChamberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05867477387444845133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2692179639230192929.post-77564509969715952362012-01-27T02:43:09.163-08:002012-01-27T02:43:09.163-08:00Hehe, don't you hate it when that happens?
I...Hehe, don't you hate it when that happens? <br /><br />I'd let Donovan kick her to the hospital first thing in the morning! What is another bruise on her after all :PKlevkinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08291521375310728019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2692179639230192929.post-64158431868847394272012-01-26T15:19:48.549-08:002012-01-26T15:19:48.549-08:00Thank you!
Yes. I completely forgot about the ho...Thank you! <br /><br />Yes. I completely forgot about the hospital bit until I started to get to that part. Oh well, she's a tough girl. I'm glad he prepared too, else they all would have died.JessicaxRockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596780597892263881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2692179639230192929.post-91526160160330103832012-01-26T15:16:29.210-08:002012-01-26T15:16:29.210-08:00Thank you!
Lol, that was actually my fault. I was...Thank you!<br /><br />Lol, that was actually my fault. I was trying to make sure I had all the photos and then when I started writing I was like, Crap. She should probably go to the hospital. But she's tough on the outside, not one to show weakness.JessicaxRockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596780597892263881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2692179639230192929.post-43099112640172670842012-01-26T15:14:44.045-08:002012-01-26T15:14:44.045-08:00Thank you! =]Thank you! =]JessicaxRockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596780597892263881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2692179639230192929.post-91778611404643010652012-01-26T15:14:29.661-08:002012-01-26T15:14:29.661-08:00Thank you so much! =D
I know! I blame it on that ...Thank you so much! =D<br /><br />I know! I blame it on that and her panic for Donovan. Though in all honesty if she hadn't answered the door he would have just broken the lock and still grabbed her.JessicaxRockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596780597892263881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2692179639230192929.post-26825425026866551922012-01-26T14:43:56.322-08:002012-01-26T14:43:56.322-08:00Wow, this was a great chapter, Jessica.
And, yeah...Wow, this was a great chapter, Jessica. <br />And, yeah, I agree with Klev, Amelia, you need to get to a hospital! like now, lol.<br />I'm glad Donovan learned to think first and came prepared.yangthecathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15083940950118677312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2692179639230192929.post-52287472909584325442012-01-26T13:17:29.803-08:002012-01-26T13:17:29.803-08:00That was a great chapter! Very well done!
Serious...That was a great chapter! Very well done!<br /><br />Seriously Amelia, you must be kidding me, with "a few fractures" and that face you don't refuse to go to the hospital lady! You are some piece of work!Klevkinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08291521375310728019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2692179639230192929.post-84614978228943887812012-01-26T12:48:01.934-08:002012-01-26T12:48:01.934-08:00I thought it was really well written, well doneI thought it was really well written, well doneAliHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15088235841224977814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2692179639230192929.post-31815703237138269602012-01-26T10:42:46.457-08:002012-01-26T10:42:46.457-08:00It wasn't terrible at all. I dare say it may e...It wasn't terrible at all. I dare say it may even have been good. (No seriously. It was great. Very well written, good job.)<br /><br />I still want to slap Amelia for going to the door in the first place but I'll just blame the baby hormones. I hope she and Donovan can move past this whole fiasco and raise their baby alright.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com